A puruasive essay to prove that "The fellowship of the ring is unquivocally good for children to read" I got a b+ for it

"The fellowship of the ring" is unequivocally good for children to read because it teaches them the importance of friendship, courage and wisdom. It also broadens their imaginations by giving them a new world to go to when their facing their own troubles.
Friendship in the "The fellowship of the ring" is displayed throughout the whole book. The strongest friendship in the fellowship would belong to hobbits; it was solid during their life in the shire and grew stronger throughout their adventure. When Frodo volunteered to bear the ring into Mordor, his three hobbit companions dauntless…